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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 Artist: Danny Hahlbohm Seven Keys by Linda L. Dowd Closed doors greet me at every turn, As I roam dark corridors. I've lost the keys to open them, ~ Locked rooms forever more. There was a time, when I'd fret not, For I knew that I'd prevail, That I could open any door, ~ My keys would never fail. But as the years sped quickly by, ~ Those keys began to rust. I hadn't taken care of them, ~ And they returned to dust. The winds of fame and fortune, ~ They blew my keys away. I'd lost all sight of Godly things, And saw no need to pray. One by one the keys were gone, As I went my selfish ways. Now door by door was slamming shut, ~ Lost rooms of sun-filled days. I roam the dark and endless halls, In this House of Cards on earth. No more shall I enjoy those rooms, Until my death ~ my birth. ~ * ~ What’s that I hear? ~ A voice so clear, ~ Resounding that all is well. As radiant Light pierces dead of night, I am raised from living hell. I’m gathered in His loving arms, All sorrows just slip away. My heart’s replete with joy and hope, As I greet the new-born day. ~ * ~ I hold in hand the Seven Keys, ~ That to me, God did entrust. Forever I will care for them, ~ I will never let them rust. One by one, doors open wide. ~ Halls flood with God’s White Light I walk them now with head held high, ~ For I would be all right. ~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (01-12-2009 02:58 PM).] |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
This was one of the most inspirational poems I ever read. I'm not big on faith, but I do believe in God and every word in your poem hit me with the truth. Thanks. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Linda, It doesn't work that way. No keys exist, and the doors are never locked. Just walk right in. That's what free will is all about. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - this is one of the very few writings that brought a tear to my eyes. So very touching this one is, as it did touch me deeply... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this sets the bar for inspirational...gives a good (and attainable) ending for others who may be on that same pathway...excellent write...truly, thank you for sharing... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful inspirational message, sharing love and light Hope |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Linda, You amaze me. Your writing amazes me. I think you truly are an Earth Angel - and a very talented one at that. Thank you for this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing "you" -- Love, Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Angelo Terrestre! This really touches the heart and soul, you have used a wonderful metaphor with your seven keys that risked to be lost. But with your wisdom and faith you always receive a first hand answer from the heavenly realms. It is a joy to walk the Path with you. Wonder filled. Love and hugs. Margherita   |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Linda, whilst I agree with Bobby, I nevertheless love your poem and see the symbols as valid and think your poem is very, very beautiful and inspiring. You, too are very beautiful (outside and inside) and inspiring. Owl |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 Ohh I love it!! Love is an understatement!! That is my all time fave picture, ever. Did I mention that I love it? lol..  Your words are just what the doctor prescribed. xoxo, Tink The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
you made my day...enjoyed your wonderful poem. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Funny, how we find ourselves locked out sometimes, never even realizing we had access to the keys, all along. So very beautiful our dear angel of light. Richy  |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Linda, as always, this you have written a beautiful poem. Even though it brought tears to my eyes. but, it did have a very nice ending. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Linda, How fascinating that you talk about the welcome home Lord-Hug. I have heard so many people say that their golden moment in heaven will be The Embrace. So perfectly described..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SlowlyFallAway ~ Your response has special meaning for me and I appreciate you sharing those thoughts with me.  Love & God's Light, EA  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
REJ ~ You're right in the sense that there are no keys in the literal sense. ~ and yes, that Door is always Open for us to walk through. Love & the Open Door, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ ~ and you being touched deeply ~ touches me deeply. You are a very dear man and poet. Your spirit is gentle and beautiful. Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
steaven ~ I aim to inspire! As you surely know, dear fellow poet, we're moved when our words move others. Thank you for your kind remarks.Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
High Hope This world of ours needs as much "Love and Light" as we can give it! Every little bit raises the vibration of Mankind. Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alison ~ I take loving comments such as yours, right into my heart. I treasure them and they keep me warm during the cold times. Thank you. ~ and I feel the very same way about you. Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita que Bonita ~ Thank you, sister spirit. I look forward to your wonder-filled responses to my poetry. I too, try to never miss a penning of yours. Your poetry lights up these blue pages ~ as does your sweet presence. It is always a pleasure to read your poems and your caring, thoughtful replies to those of others. Linda Angelo Terrestre |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Owl ~ I appreciate your kind and thought-filled comments, dear Venerable Wise One. Merci beaucoups. Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ceinwyn ~ I'm with you! I love that painting! It is so welcoming and comforting. Danny Hahlbohm is my favourite spiritual artist! God's Hand must surely guide his paintbrush. Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
rvwoo ~ Thank you! ~ and you just made my day, as well! God bless you!Love & God's Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Richy ~ Perhaps if God put a bright neon Welcome sign on the door, more people would be able to find it. Just a thought! lol Love & the Open Door, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oklahoma's Sweetest Rose ~ Yes, the poem does start out on a very sad note ~ but you know me, I like happy endings! ~ which ofttimes, make for happy new beginnings ~ as in this case! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
threadbear ~ I appreciate your comments and they are a very welcomed addition to this 'thread'. Thank you!Love & God's Light Linda |
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