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| Open Poetry #44 |
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surrendering to circumstance |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I won’t pretend I don’t think this is madness I won’t pretend I don’t see the sadness in the fabric of your rhyme I see you surrendering to circumstance of happily ever after condemned either way but what’s worse? what’s better? out of reach dreams you placed on a shelf back when you could still hope I heard the prayers whispered in your soul I covered my eyes too late I didn’t mean to intrude I couldn’t help but feel your emotions so broken choices sometimes aren’t really choices at all. ~SEA~ *for Dixie* |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, What you say is true. Many people never have choices. It's up to the rest of us to try and ease their pain. Love Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a grand 'penning' (to one who most certainly deserves far better than what 'life' has misdirected her way!) ... and a fine 1st. 'comment/reply' post to this 'write' as well! sustained applause for this poem! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - nice to read your writings again. Yes, choices at times aren't really choices at all... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply sensitive write, a reaching out from one soul to another! And a very eloquent picture too. Love, Margherita  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I just read on her My Space where it says she is getting married on Saturday , wow , wrong or right choice , I will continue to pray and hope she is ok Hope |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
Liked it all especially: choices sometimes aren’t really choices at all. you're really right, best of luck with your own choises T.C |
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Heart Shots Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 11 |
Hope can flourish especially when one thinks all hope is lost. Don't give up! Very nicely written! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh that's good! Love the ending because it's so true. Trying to be something we're not is a tough act no matter what the situation. Most likely hurting others without even knowing it. Good writng young lady! Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very true... And how lucky she is to have you. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Famous line: If you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice. Or how about choosing the lessor of two evils. What kind of choice is that. I learned a long time ago to choose what is better for someone you love, than what is best for you. You may not always be happy with your choice, but by choosing to make someone else happy, you can always say you made a "good" choice. Wonderful Poem. WT. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I liked the first stanza a lot. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
continuing applause for this 'write'!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
SEA this is absolutely beautiful writing from you... I continue to have good thoughts for our Dixie... love and hugs RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Sea, Frequently I have looked at people and seriously wondered WHAT they saw in someone, to make them make the final committment of marriage. Chemistry is magic and some magic is stronger than others, ... I guess. Eloquent work, Sea. Jeff |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I love you ladybug! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*library* |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Very lovely SEA.  turtle |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Sea- This is piercing in its simplicity of form and depth of insight. Loved it!!! Indigo |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so very much for the reads and the understanding, kind replies. they mean a lot to me  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's good to know that somebody "gets it" love you ladybug |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much and Dixie, I love you. Until they have walked a mile in your shoes, no one should have anything negative to say to you about this. He lied to you....  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very sensitive write, SEA. Ida |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Impeccable, sensitive and beautifully done... but then, isn't everything you treat us to? D. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Again, your words join pictures and add dimension and volume... well done, Daughter. Mom |
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