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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Spring Where do dreams begin Here in my slumber The grass blades are soft and smell like roses If I was the wind Could we dance together? Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
Who is "we"? No one else is mentioned in the poem. Does we imply you and the reader? This poem might make more sense on oxycontin. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Very good Juju A man could fall in love just for this alone . . . With your permission, I would like to add it to my Word file of poems by others Again, this is poetry John . |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yes John you can. Tao, the we is fine there. -Juju |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
juju..enjoyed it... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet dreams!  May your springtime be a gentle time.  Linda  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, The answer is yes. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tenderly romantic. Very lovely. Love, Margherita |
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