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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-05-05 05:04 PM


        
       

Photo by:~Me~



Deep are the eyes of endless desire,
I am peering into your loving soul,
passion raging, unstoppable fire,
this tempest flames out of control,

Soft are these pink rose petal lips,
awaiting the sweet taste of your kiss,
your cup, from which my soul, sips,
kisses beyond heaven, inside true bliss,

As I lay here in warm soft aglow,
My dark eyes of want looking at you,
as lids close, dreams begin to flow,
of you and I, the most beautiful view,

underneath the blue velvet, misty moon,
where the sands meet the waving seas,
you and I wrapped in loves' blanket cocoon,
discovering our midnight fantasies,

Here is where we meet,among the stars,
drifting in twilight, calling out my name,
floating on misty clouds above venus or mars,
Our eternal love, we endlessly proclaim,

Come to me soon, while silver moon shines,
For dream time passes all too fast,
flying high above the tall cedar pines,
forever we will make love last.


                    



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (05-06-2009 06:41 AM).]

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1 posted 2009-05-05 06:46 PM


Wishing that you will always being wrapped in "loves'blanket cocoon".

thank you for sharing

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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2 posted 2009-05-06 01:00 AM


I'm so glad that you're back my love, and this poem was a lovely gift you've brought back for me.

I missed you dearly.

You look so unbelievably beautiful, your gentle eyes are the most lovely I've ever seen and reflect your gentle soul, your words touched my heart and I love you more than anything.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

Eirian
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3 posted 2009-05-06 01:17 AM


Utterly beautiful...

And your poem is too ofcourse



ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2009-05-06 03:49 AM


Nice photos.
I'm glad you have a romantic heart as your pen name suggest and then there is your writing which is ........

"underneath the blue velvet, misty moon,
where the sands meet the waving seas,
you and I wrapped in loves' blanket cocoon,
discovering our midnight fantasies,"

LOVELY!

Eric

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-05-07 07:08 PM


Fine writing...James
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