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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2009-05-05 05:16 PM


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More than a wish  (for Mothers Day)

The first time that I saw you,
I swear I really knew,
I just had to have you,
Nobody else would do,

You were the one for me,
I could tell, yes, by your smile,
If you could do me a little favor,
Spend some time with me for a while,

Of course we fell in love,
Then we married really soon,
We knew we were meant for one another,
And the bond between us grew,

After several years together,
We created a little boy,
And now our family is complete,
Our hearts are filled with joy,

We have spent great times with each other,
And how our son has grown,
He’s brought so much more happiness,
Than we had ever known,

So on this Mother's Day,
I wish only to give you this,
My promise to always love you,
And seal it each day with a kiss.

Happy Mothers Day.



The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.


[This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (05-05-2009 10:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2009-05-05 05:31 PM


Tracey, this tender, heart-felt poem will undoubtedly make your wife's Mother's Day, VERY special!

God bless you, your wife, and your little boy!



Linda

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awww...very sweet...she's a lucky lady for sure
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4 posted 2009-05-05 08:06 PM


I would bet that the entire day will be a
huge success...for all of you.

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5 posted 2009-05-05 10:46 PM



Tracey my good friend that is such a kovely mother's day poem, your wife will love it

as we who read it, will as well. thanks for sharing. A happy Mother's day to your wife and all the other Mothers on PIP. Take care.

Lindsay

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6 posted 2009-05-05 10:57 PM


Linda, thank you so  much for enjoying my poem,
I buy a card with and insert, take it out and put my poem in for her.   She thinks it's pretty cool.

Happy mothers day to you.
Tracey

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7 posted 2009-05-05 10:59 PM


That's a first,  Melting,  How cool
Thank you so much.

Happy Mothers day to you and yours.
Tracey.

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8 posted 2009-05-05 11:01 PM


suzy,  thanks so much for your kind comments,

Hope you have a very happy Mothers day.

Tracey.

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9 posted 2009-05-05 11:04 PM


Magnus,  Lindsay,

Gentlemen,  Thank you so much for enjoying my mothers day poem.

May the mothers in your lifes have a very special day as well.

Sincerely, Tracey

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10 posted 2009-05-06 11:00 AM


What a beautiful wish... she's going to love it! *S*

And what a beautiful baby! *S*

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11 posted 2009-05-07 09:08 AM


A very lovely sentiment here, and what a darling baby!
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12 posted 2009-05-07 09:14 AM


The fact that you wrote this tender tribute of love and gratitude for your wife makes it all the more precious.

Beautiful! And how sweet is the little one!

Love and happy Mother's Day.

Margherita

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