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viking_metal
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0 posted 2009-05-05 03:04 PM


Southern girl,
interesting shades of violet
in your scarlet drawl.
Hair pulled back
in an I-don't-care ponytail.

Southern girl,
a bit of Texan ocean
in each of your eyes.
Flavors of grace
in a unique and floral scent.

Southern girl,
I will keep waiting,
but I'm begging you:
Move to Minnesota.
We'd like you just fine here.


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-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

[This message has been edited by viking_metal (05-07-2009 10:40 AM).]

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1 posted 2009-05-05 03:06 PM


how could she resist?!
viking_metal
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2 posted 2009-05-05 03:21 PM


Man, who knows. They all do it though :P

Must be the shaved head/beard combination?

No, seriously, I don't have the money to fly down to Texas .... I'm working on it though.

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3 posted 2009-05-05 10:28 PM


Keeper writing!  

But .. will southern girls honestly be happy in Minnesota?  Kinda cold there, dontcha think?  Not that an Alaskan girl would know diddly squat about that.

Too hot in the south!

Anyway, I is a fan.

A

viking_metal
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4 posted 2009-05-05 10:31 PM


Mademoiselle Ala-hoon.

This is true. Females from the south have weak blood. Since I don't have an Alaskan girl within reach...


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jwesley
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5 posted 2009-05-06 09:10 PM


Some good chuckles here, my friend - and bunch of reality....Lol...here...much enjoyed...

j. (a southern boy loving ALL the southern girls we abound in!) - Be nice we may share...but not if she's from Texas!!!

Unless maybe you nothern roots are maybe actually Nothern Texas roots...ya'll know how big our home is....

j.

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6 posted 2009-05-06 10:20 PM


Aww, I see you have a pic up! ~ Hello


ARCTIC WIND

viking_metal
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7 posted 2009-05-06 11:20 PM


J... Haha, thanks. No, but I've got roots in Louisiana... Does that count? Glad you enjoyed the read.

Arctic... Hello, mademoiselle.


-P

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Kaoru
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8 posted 2009-05-06 11:51 PM


I'm from Tx and live in Mn, so this is kinda weird. lol

Liked it though.

viking_metal
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9 posted 2009-05-07 09:54 AM


Thanks much.

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