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TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2009-05-04 06:30 AM

I am old skool rap
and faded jeans
Trolling the beach
and gathering things
I am worn too thin
I am walking proud
I am desert dust
I am screaming loud
I am looking out
I am looking in
I am calling chiefs
I am rusty tin

Raindance
Member

since 2009-02-07

Posts 120
West Coast

1 posted 2009-05-04 09:06 AM

Beautiful picture. Your well-worded poem conjures up very familiar images in my mind.
Old skool rap and faded jeans...I love that!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2009-05-04 02:33 PM

beautiful raindance, very enjoyable read and a brilliant homage...Thanks for the poem.

yann

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

3 posted 2009-05-04 03:05 PM

Thanks : )

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

4 posted 2009-05-04 06:27 PM

TinaT - I thought this was well written and it pulls the reader into the words with the image of the indian. Enjoyed it. Namyh

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

5 posted 2009-05-04 10:07 PM

Thanks Namyh : )

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2009-05-05 11:54 PM

Wow!

Need I say more?

Wow!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2009-05-06 04:00 AM

I am old skool rap
and faded jeans

That surely made me smile.

Have a chin wag and relax it will 'Set You Free'.

This is great!

Eric

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

8 posted 2009-05-06 10:20 AM

Thanks Eric & Ali.. : )

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

9 posted 2009-05-06 04:09 PM

This brought me back to Marge Tindal. A beautiful poet who was here for many years before her passing.

A loved this!

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I do the MS Walk everyday!

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

10 posted 2009-05-06 05:28 PM

Being compared to Marge is a great honor.

Thank you.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

11 posted 2009-05-06 09:02 PM

Yo dear Tina,

I like this "I am" poem a lot. It's a good picture too.

Love Bobby

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

12 posted 2009-05-06 10:15 PM

This poem flowed well Tina! ~ Enjoyed your poem

ARCTIC WIND

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

13 posted 2009-05-06 11:43 PM

Thank you both kindly

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