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An " I Am" from the past
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An " I Am" from the past |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"I AM" challenge I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. I wonder if my dreams treasured in hold, shall see reality. I hear your voice calling within the storms that rage in my night. I see your shadow beckoning me to collide in pleasures delight. I want, I need, I desire the always of your decree. I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. I pretend in waters surround, you enter and freeze me to your press. I feel you always touching my mind, shaping, molding, I acquiesce. I touch your touch, wrapping myself within reflections flamed by candle light. I worry that this is but a dream, to be snuffed out each night. I cry the moment your whispers leave me weakened with no guarantee. I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. I understand your love for me is true and must trust in your word. I say what my heart desires in expressions to you only, heard. I dream of the day when words of love shall not be distanced any more. I try each morning to hold onto the memory of each breath shared before. I hope that the heavens above hear my nightly plea. I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. 2001 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Now that's a powerfully appealing thought! Beautiful, very beautiful in its whole. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very compelling read! You have so much love in you to give. Lucky be any man who receives it!  Beautifully written, M!  Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you both so much! M |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
... No unrequited love here. I felt every tremulous breath and delight in a vibrantly warm intelligent lover/friend who opens worlds of the heart...only so many are fortunate enough to discover. I'm thinking we find such rappport when we are ready to give it, too... I couldn't agree with the other two comments more! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, wow... *S* Absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Absolutly penned with love! I enjoy the read very much. Theresia p.s. I also couldn't resist to post mine from long ago.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me, I loved the "...I am the essence of you, in the presence of me. " What a wonderfully, full and compelete line... enyoyed this much... j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well done! much sustained applause !! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Maureen, may all your dreams come true.  |
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