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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I whispered to you in heart's secret reveal this, my love is how I really feel you are the dreams my soul wishes real the aching need, I try unsuccessfully to conceal the only one to ever truly know the hopeless romantic, in me the sweetest of emotions given, unabashedly most cherished of all memories held on to, tenaciously you are the only one the one I will love, endlessly ~SEA~ |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Suzy, That's beautiful, Very nice write. Tracey. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's wonderful to feel that way... M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is the voice of your heart and soul, dear Sue, and the depth of your feelings is expressed beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"this, my love is how I really feel" ~ and you certainly know how to express that love! Your pen drips some of the loveliest pink ink!   Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
SEA/// You write feelings and romance so very well. Always have! |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Lovely, mademoiselle. Not unlike yourself. -P Everyone deserves to be loved, even you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - very touching write by your heart... BC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You write such beautiful romance my dear. I have read your work and wished for you that you would find someone to love you above your intensity for guarding against lost loves and right into that heart of yours and keep you happy. Love you right in the middle of your intelligence for what you are in your surrendering soft qualities that you express so many times with such eloquent expression. I know it was my second time around that fulfilled my needs for reasons that I can't explain in words but realize it's finally true. Sometimes battle scared hearts mellow out and take the lessons with charm and dignity and build on them. Take care and have a nice day sweet poet lady. Eric |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much for your thoughtful replies  Eric, it's all good...but thanks...just someone I'll always love... you rock.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you are the dreams my soul wishes real the aching need, I try unsuccessfully to conceal Such poignant yearn... so very beautiful! *S* |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"you are the dreams my soul wishes real the aching need, I try unsuccessfully to conceal" This verse alone is lovely. Great write. =) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful, beautiful penned. you always know to touch the heart with your words of love and feelings. I always enjoy your poetry dear Sue. thank you for sharing your loving thoughts. Theresia |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
your writes reveal a dichotomy that is difficult to comprehend...makes it so worth the read...thank you for sharing this lovely work |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Beautiful Sue, it really touches the heart. Love to you dear Lady and take care. Lindsay |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautifully expressed , I understand someone brought those feelings out in me and love will continue endlessly Hope |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
This is a beautifully deep expression which isn't always easy to put into words, but you've done it so well. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Simply touching and beautiful writing. |
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greytree Junior Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 45Wales |
It seems almost trite to say this is beautiful, but I can think of no word better. Wonderfully worded sentiments. In such an ugly time, beauty is the real protest |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
for sure, one of my favs!  |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
I dont know how you keep things so short and sweet but i love it, it takes me at least twice as many words to get out half the emotion that you can. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine and very real Romanticism! much applause !! [I guess I'll never understand where love 'goes ... nor 'why'] |
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