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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA 
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In The Dark Of Night[This message has been edited by Oklahoma Rose (04-28-2009 01:22 PM).] |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
kinda sad lost love is always a one sided affair Love your name My daughter is in Oklahoma, just outside of Tulsa and my Grandmother lived in Seminole most of her life. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue, your heart expresses this deep yearning for what once was so intensely. It's indeed in the "dark of night" that the lack of loving arms is felt like this. Beautiful in its sadness. May love again enter your life! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What was suppose to be always and forever Seemed to have suddenly come to an end The love I felt for you deep inside me Never was just pretend This lament for lost love is one I understand well... Excellent! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Sue, my dear friend, I feel like wrapping my arms around you and comforting you. You've come a long way, but true love never truly dies. Emotions that strong, never completely leave us. This was a sweetly expressed, emotive piece of writing. Love you! Linda  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is a sad beauty to this...it truly is a heart-hurter...makes one feel deeply...in that respect, you've penned a gem...through the pain...its beauty shines through...well done |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Sue my heart goes out to you after reading this sad heart touching poem. I hope the sun will shine again for you in the not too distant future, good luck and good health. love Lindsay |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Very heartfelt poem, sometimes people can be judgemental about us and they can be so wrong. Lost love always causes great pain and wounds heal slowly but the do heal. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It takes a lifetime to heal losing real love. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Some pains do not part us because they are loves. I thought it as reading you. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Hello Sue ... this is so much from your heart. I'm sorry you are still so sad remember way back when. hugs to you dear lady ... ________________________ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oklahoma Rose - felt your sadness with this writing. Someone named Oklahoma Rose should always be with a heart that smiles... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Thank you all for reading, and for your kind replies. It really means a lot to me. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"What happened to ‘til death do you part? What happened to always and forever?"... I was wondering that just the other day, Sue. M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sad, Sue, but good writing. Ida |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just checking on you Sue, (looking good)  M |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Such loss leaves little to say, except that my heart goes out, and I understand such bruising. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well now, aren't you a picture of loveliness! ~ Love the new pic! I came back for another read of your heart-rendering poem ~ and voila! ~ A new photo of Oklahoma's Sweetest Rose!  loveya! Linda  |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Sad and very lovely...I can certainly relate to this one. Regards. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sad we tend to keep looking back.Look ahead and you may be surprised. You are still young and a good looker and also a sweetheart. I love the new photo! latearrival. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sue, I like this picture a lot - but, even more, I like your poem. What does happen to love like that? Maybe it is training for a greater love down the road. Maybe it the basis for the person we become. Whatever it is - you are sure a sign of how a person grows and bestows kindness upon many. You have on me that's for sure. So, grow in love - it shines from you in that picture. Love to you, Alison |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
nakdthoughts, thank you for reading and replying. I wonder about this quite often. vandana, thank you for reading and replying to my heartfelt poem. Marchmadness, thank you so much for reading and for the kind comment. Klassy Lassy, thank you for reading and replying. A bruised heart seems to last forever. Earth Angel, my sweet friend. You sure know how to lift a persons spirits. Rex, thank you for reading, and for the nice reply. latearrival, I try really hard not to keep looking back. But, it seems like sometimes those memories come back, and just won't leave. If only I could feel as young, as I look, I'd be in good shape. Alison, my friend, thank you for your very kind comment. It touches this heart of mine to know that I have touched anyone in anyway. And, is very encouraging to me. I admire you alot. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very real and emotive 'write' ... well done! |
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