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Open Poetry #44

She is Time

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-04-29 11:45 AM

She is time
She is ethereal as such
She is on my mind
Emblazoned there to touch

With my thoughts of tenderness
Clean and pure for all its worth
Lost in this wilderness
Of an alternate type of Earth
Where the thoughts are the deed
To drive the point home
For that which I ever need
To never spend eternity alone

She is as ageless as the stars
Held transfixed in the sky
Yet travels near and far
Always just behind my eye
For in the mind, beauty exists
That much is proven true
What else could explain this
Whence thoughts of love flew

She is eternal above all
She is forever in my mind
Makes me rise and fall,
She is time

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-04-29 03:53 PM

Absolutely beautiful!

A truly inspiring write!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-04-29 06:08 PM

CG, you have penned an ethereal, timeless beauty. I very much enjoy your writing.

You are a poet of great warmth and depth.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2009-04-29 07:46 PM

This is truly beautiful. Ethereal tone, satin texture. A deeply intimate expression of something reverent and long standing.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-05-01 09:15 AM

For in the mind, beauty exists
That much is proven true

In this mind, the existence of beauty is proven every time I read the works of your pen. Magnificent!!

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