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SeraphimBroken
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since 2009-03-09
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0 posted 2009-04-28 10:31 PM


My dearest, I give,     (vulnerable one, I take)
you my love's gift,     (your love i will forsake)
all of my days,         (no time i shall give)
as long as i live       (as long as you live)

You are my song.        (wretched voice of yours)
Precious and true.      (speak only when spoken too)
my hearts desire        (others, better than you)
my dreams for you.      (I make their dreams come true)

My greatest endeavor, (I don't care to try)
my promised one, (promises run dry)
Is to love you forever, (I have loved you never)
like no one has done. (it's done forever)

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2009-04-29 10:54 AM


Oh my.  That one speaks to me.  The perfect opposite--and so often that's what's really there.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

SeraphimBroken
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since 2009-03-09
Posts 74
USA
2 posted 2009-04-29 07:02 PM


Thanks. I'm wondering what it would be like in reverse? I guess this one could go both ways.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-04-30 12:59 PM


I guess there's two sides to every story.
                                   Ida

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