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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan 
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“Clarity” The band of city lights twine Around his Ford Ribboning along the interstate Two old friends reminisce A surge of passion interplaying With the artificial, ethereal lights Recounting roads tailed in the past As the reflecting spectrum streams by us |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Now how awesome is this? Love the title, love the poem, and yes'm, love you too. This was...a surprise, and a delightful intrigue, fer sure.  Well done, lovie!  |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Thanks Karen. Love ya too. Thank my uber challenging poetry class and pretty talented prof for editing this number. Hope all is well in New Orleans. Jill |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
REWRITE “Clarity” The band of city lights twine Around his Ford Ribboning along the interstate Two old friends reminisce A surge of passion interplaying With the artificial, ethereal lights Recounting roads tailed in the past As the reflecting spectrum streams by us: Unfurling outward and onward Toward Road signs marking possible Entrances And Exits |
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