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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2009-04-28 04:28 AM



C
twilight turnips stare at under stones,
ankled down in sordid clusters,
grouped by bilingual apparitions
with no respect for windshield wipers.
O
fables asked in department stores,
while she danced with green sparrows
and lost her innocence under its thumb
F
it doesn't matter in the grand finals
scheme of duality's twisted gnawings
F
ears kept on the horizon
and one eye on the pedal
E
i
do dahdo dah
E
i oh
five miles long

forbity torbit

ratchelet ankalop twiddly

ahhhh


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WTBAKELAR
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since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089
Utah, USA
1 posted 2009-04-28 08:22 AM


What was in that coffee you're drinking?

I want some.

Tracey

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
2 posted 2009-04-28 08:27 AM


A true poem with it being a poem.
Excellent sound of words and results.

clever talks delay friendship!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2009-04-30 01:00 PM


I think I would like some of that coffee too.
                                  Ida

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