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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-04-27 08:06 PM

Brussels Chocolate

She knew I was just passing
through, she knew.
Over coffee and cinnamon buns
I looked into her eyes
and I told her the truth,
no sad stories nor silly lies.
While words of admiration
proceeded from my mouth
she told me of a
chocolate factory
on the way
to her house.
The gooey cinnamon buns
were scrumptious and sticky,
her long black hair
fell all over my coffee,
and she so close
I should have puckered
up and kissed her,
but I chose instead
to resist her.
Later while eating
Brussels chocolate
I could no longer
resist her,
inbetween each bite
of chocolate
I kissed her,
kissed her
and kissed her.
Our faces were
a mess, totally
chocolate blessed.

JamesLee
27April
2009

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

1 posted 2009-04-27 09:22 PM

Them be the bestest kisses.
Now is Brussels; milk or Dark Chocolate?

Fun write
Tracey.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-04-28 03:26 AM

Thank you for the morning smiles, dear James. A sensuous chocolate meeting it was! Belgium chocolate is quite extraordinary ... and as a Swiss I am a severe judge I think!

Love,
Margherita

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2009-04-28 06:59 AM

Its good to get into this kind of mess James. Fun write indeed.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

4 posted 2009-04-28 08:33 AM

Yummy and passionate. This poem is sunshine in a cloudless moment caught in a girl's eye who has just been kissed.

clever talks delay friendship!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-04-28 10:42 AM

Mmm! Mmm! Mmm! Kisses are my favourite food!
~ and chocolate kisses? Yummy in the tummy!

James, this is a deliciously sweet piece of romantic writing! Adorable!

Linda

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-04-28 11:02 AM

James,

Chocolate will rot your teeth, and make you fat. I just thought you should know that.

Bobby

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2009-04-28 11:26 AM

I'd love that kind of breakfast! LOL Enjoyed this! *S*

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2009-04-28 02:41 PM

chocolate blessed? That made me smile! I could see this with a sweetheart, but also with a small daughter and a Daddy who doesn't get to see her very often. Nicely done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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