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Open Poetry #44
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2009-04-25 12:24 PM

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Suddenly
It began to rain
And I was right there


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-04-25 01:12 PM

Yo John,

Yes, and then you would know about the rain.  That would be Satori.

Bobby
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-04-26 03:36 AM

I was reading your poem and suddenly
I was right there.
                            Ida
Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
3 posted 2009-04-26 04:51 AM

Short and sweet cool
critical mass
Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275
Michigan
4 posted 2009-04-26 06:56 PM

suddenly I began ro read
and then I posted this.
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