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Don the Beachcomber
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Don the Beachcomber |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Don the Beachcomber He left her last summer but now his life is a bummer realizing how much he misses her wanting to hold and kiss her and he doesn't like these feelings that his heart is revealing the measure of the feelings that he possesses for her his realization that he needs her, ever since they've been apart the softness of his heart keeps reminding him of the good days the times they shared together, now he can't wait he's hoping its not too late to ask for a brand new start to get back into her heart... back into her heart. JamesLee 22April 2009 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It is very apparent to me that Don Juan-ts her back badly! Sometimes we let the best one's slip away! aloha hugs, Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, Needless to say, I wish Don good luck on that. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - a heart felt is longing for a return, well done... BC |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Better late than never James…all the very best to Don.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Earth Angel, Robert, Bill and Pradad for the wonderful responses...fortunately for me my honey has not slipped away, I wrote this thinking how a man would feel if his sweetheart had slipped away...Jame |
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