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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 324
california

0 posted 2009-04-24 02:35 AM





I'm not a fan of apathy
but this lump in my gullet
is making it harder and harder
to swallow.
It'd be fun for a day
to take up indifference,
to swallow without recognition,
involuntary as love,
just for a day.
My caustically chiseled face
would still be there,
it's the only one I have,
but I'd be able to swallow.

Keep flying to the sun with these gargoyle wings.
Joe Houck

© Copyright 2009 Joe B. Houck - All Rights Reserved
Raindance
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since 2009-02-07
Posts 120
West Coast
1 posted 2009-04-24 08:28 AM


I feel like this is part of a conversation you've just had, it is worded that well from your gut.  And I can relate!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-04-24 08:40 AM




Hmmm, I kinda know what you mean, Joe.

If it takes an apathetic attitude to swallow that lump,
then so be it... Let go ~ let God
~ and s-w-a-l-l-o-w...

Oh, and here is some magic potion that I
just made for you
~ to help it go down nice and easy...

    

Warm hug,

Linda

WTBAKELAR
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3 posted 2009-04-24 09:50 AM


This sounds like having to deal with a very troubling problem, that someone else has brought upon you, and you are the one that made the decision to be the better person.

Or not?

Nice write.
Tracey.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2009-04-24 01:12 PM


Well done and I can also relate.
                            Ida

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

5 posted 2009-04-25 02:29 PM


"to take up indifference,
to swallow without recognition"

...interesting & provocative thought...this needs to go back up...I am still contemplating over that "swallow without recognition" part...enjoy the ones that make me think...and this one did

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