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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-04-23 09:51 AM

we would always be more of a threesome
then just two lovers I imagine
she and the voyeur sun and me
and those moments when they arrive
before I can get to their windows

she waits for him on cool mornings
and wears her goose flesh under gown
so he will know she is wanting him again
to feel the warm of more then a man
but only temporarily she says to rile him

and when the glistening is her glovery
shimmering her bosom with cellophane
she turns her back to his dawning fingers
and sways her charms toward my eyes
she leans low over my complexion’s end

and brings me the flavors of their melding
she feeds my hands her slippery seclusion
and guides my mind into the well of her ocean
undulations are the waves of lovers
and her body weeps the writhe of passage

then with whispers she only kneads the night

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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2009-04-23 02:57 PM

Lovely warm...
wonderful imagery!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-04-23 03:07 PM

ms sun..thanks favorite smile lady!!

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-05-03 10:55 PM

"and when the glistening is her glovery"

I know only one person who would come up with that. You are the best. I love that line -

- and I love all of this poem.

Alison

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-05-04 06:27 AM

thanks ali-san girl

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2009-05-05 09:07 AM

Gah....This is absolutely gorgeous...really.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2009-05-05 09:29 AM

thanks lady K

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-05-05 07:22 PM

quote:
we would always be more of a threesome
then just two lovers I imagine
she and the voyeur sun and me

I love this thought. Love in the open.

Complex, passionate and ... a tiny bit melancholic too in my eyes.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2009-05-06 07:20 AM

thanks ms mar!!

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