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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Under construction and junk everywhere this incomplete business no happiness pill but no one can breathe let alone swallow a seemingly pointless attempt at renew. It’s okay and good to move the view from here to a another outlook but there is no magic in junk everywhere to simply implode at the touch of a thought. Under construction and junk everywhere; ‘tis just the first and initial assault on the queen of denial who wears the crown of a fool to safeguard security. The incomplete will become complete and junk everywhere a faint memory when the queen bows to whatever must be to effect a return unto love. Meanwhile that queen is still a fool under construction with junk everywhere! Helen / 23 April 2009 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know the feeling Helen... always enjoy your imagery and "tact".  M |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Love the way junk everywhere is stressed. Under construction, take diversion, work under progress just leaves a mess everywhere. Very thoughtful.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Under construction and junk everywhere; ‘tis just the first and initial assault on the queen of denial who wears the crown of a fool to safeguard security. This is wonderful... I thoroughly enjoyed! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"under construction with junk everywhere!" ...hits way too close to home...have you been looking in my windows...? love the theme you've captured here |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks everyone for your kind comments. We've suddenly been thrown into winter so this poem was more or less inspired by the unpacking of warmer clothing - it's all just junk really. And "M" I've been puzzling over the word "tact". Steavenr, I think I may sometimes look into windows of the soul and do, I must admit, turn or run away when I see junk there. Thanks again. Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressive how you weaved this together. A state of mind I understand ... I dream of the essential to surround me! Great work, dear Helen! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Grrrrr! Attack it! ~ One piece at a time! lol I find it almost impossible to have organized thoughts if everything around me is in chaos. Mind you, I've been known to be a bit of a procrastinator!  Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Honeybunch - construction and junk every where. At times I wonder if it every really gets cleaned up... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I call the S. alvation Army or write a poem, depending on what kind of junk I'm trying to get rid of. I love the idea of this poem. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your comments. I'm on the move so there's going to be more junk around me for the next little while ... still a fool, yes, indeed! Helen |
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