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Fizzle
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0 posted 2009-04-22 11:11 PM


While daring a rainbow unweaved
He gave it all to breathe
Flotsam in the sea, adrift
with no more left to give

Now, as if dead, their eyes stare
perhaps in grief, perhaps indifference
yet they cannot see what is clearly there
his bare soul and heart, his essence

Oh, how he wishes they could see
see all that he is, all that he could be
How he wishes they could walk
and be free of the damning flock

But they see nothing, nothing at all
They don't bother with a dying flame
There they lie, forever enthralled
while he by the Outside is claimed


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1 posted 2009-04-22 11:16 PM


Diego,  Interesting write,  I would really like to know more about who or what the focus was.

Look forward to more from you.
Tracey

Fizzle
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2 posted 2009-05-08 01:30 PM


I'm the focus, in a sense. I and my place in interaction.
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