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Open Poetry #44

Neath The Glowing Sunset

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-04-21 11:40 AM

Neath The Glowing Sunset

Here beside by the ocean
At the end of the day
Barefoot on the sand
We strolled along the bay

We often came back here
To where we first met
Sharing love and light
Neath the glowing sunset

While golden rays spread
On a shimmering sea
Hand in hand we walk
As we share the intimacy

Upon the beach at sunset
Waves whisper amore
This haven by the sea
Glows of love forevermore

Hope©2009

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-04-21 12:55 PM

This is lovely! I like the soft tenderness... well done! *S*

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2009-04-21 04:04 PM

beautiful...and that last stanza sums it all up so very well...nice read...thank you for sharing

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-04-21 04:28 PM

HopeS - memories, oh those sweet memories read in this writing...

BC

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2009-04-21 10:42 PM

A very sweet romantic post dear Hope in

your usual, very readable style. Love.

Lindsay

critical mass
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since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

5 posted 2009-04-21 10:53 PM

The water and sand always has a certain attraction for lovers.

I remember the white sands of Gulfport.

CM

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