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jeannefiedler
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0 posted 2009-04-20 09:12 AM



It's a half moon
At low tide
The sea is black-like
In motion, waving, nodding
I'm depressed...

I see the sun rise
In orange crystal
A weaving checkerboard
In and out through the clouds...
God is approaching...

Orange brilliance scintillating
Throughout the water and the sky
The clouds merge into one another
And then separate
As the sky turns a naked blue
I feel peace...

The sky is gray-like and foaming
The sun moves through the light
My spirit shines through...

The sand sifts through my feet
Shells are scattered everywhere
The fragments of my life....

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2009-04-20 11:14 AM


excellent first post! Welcome to Passions!

latearrival
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2 posted 2009-04-20 01:13 PM


Welcome to our home, enjoyed your poem. latearrival
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-04-20 07:56 PM


Welcome! Being a true sea and sand spirit, I really enjoyed the visuals in this!!!
Thank you for sharing your coastal moment.

steavenr
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4 posted 2009-04-21 12:14 PM


though you caused me to miss the ocean once again, this is a lovely, lovely write...welcome to PiP...and certainly looking forward to more...
Prasad Nataraj
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5 posted 2009-04-21 06:18 AM


Welcome to the blue sea, first post paints vivid beach scene.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2009-04-21 11:15 AM


Welcome to Passions, Jeanne!

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2009-04-28 12:48 PM


"My spirit shines through..."

~ Indeed it does!

Hi! Welcome to piptalk! I thoroughly enjoyed the spiritual and natural beauty of your debuting poem!

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,

Earth Angel

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2009-04-28 12:31 PM


jeannefiedler - nice write for your first post, looking forward to seeing more...

BC

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