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jeannefiedler New Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 4 |
It's a half moon At low tide The sea is black-like In motion, waving, nodding I'm depressed... I see the sun rise In orange crystal A weaving checkerboard In and out through the clouds... God is approaching... Orange brilliance scintillating Throughout the water and the sky The clouds merge into one another And then separate As the sky turns a naked blue I feel peace... The sky is gray-like and foaming The sun moves through the light My spirit shines through... The sand sifts through my feet Shells are scattered everywhere The fragments of my life.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 excellent first post! Welcome to Passions! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Welcome to our home, enjoyed your poem. latearrival |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! Being a true sea and sand spirit, I really enjoyed the visuals in this!!! Thank you for sharing your coastal moment. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
though you caused me to miss the ocean once again, this is a lovely, lovely write...welcome to PiP...and certainly looking forward to more... |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Welcome to the blue sea, first post paints vivid beach scene. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Jeanne! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"My spirit shines through..." ~ Indeed it does!  Hi! Welcome to piptalk! I thoroughly enjoyed the spiritual and natural beauty of your debuting poem! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jeannefiedler - nice write for your first post, looking forward to seeing more... BC |
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