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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-04-18 06:49 PM


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A ladybug
And butterfly
And not all
That far away
A robin sings

A squirrel
And duck
On the same
Green lawn
First buds on
A willow tree

An open window
In the afternoon
White ships of clouds
Blue sky and sea

I’m sure
There’re things
Deserving
Deeper pondering
But not today


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critical mass
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since 2009-03-25
Posts 275
Michigan
1 posted 2009-04-18 07:28 PM


Really liked this.

I feel like that a lot.

Cheers

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