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WindWalker
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0 posted 2009-04-17 07:24 PM


This Is Earth

This is earth
mother earth we call her
giving us sunshine and water
when we let her
that's less and less often...

This is earth
where so many
have sought endlessly
for the land
of milk and honey
found salt marshes and the stinger
instead!

This is earth
our cradle
"rock-a-bye baby!"
valley of sorrow and death
where heaven and hell
walk comfortably hand in hand.

This is earth
where the living die
and the dead live
where 12 million children
die without food--that's
32,876.71 child per day
give or take...

This is earth
where the leaders
create deficits
from our greed
to steal the food
of those who die
to pay them back, why --
-- for dying? --

"This is earth" cries the prophet
to the crescent-mooned sky
among the stars his voice echoes
"Do not come here--
do not come near--
their ignorance so contagious
throbs in mortal agony
capturing all
that passes by!"

© Copyright 2009 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2009-04-17 09:21 PM


ouch

a sad reality

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-04-17 09:26 PM


Yo WindWalker,

Earth is where you live, and you're every bit a part of it as everybody else.

Bobby

Namyh
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3 posted 2009-04-18 03:31 AM


WindWalker - This is Earth where Man in his infancy has yet to become an adult. He builds wondrous castles in the sand and then steps on them with childlike abandon. His cities stretch upward and outward but he'll drop a bomb just to see their destruction. He has become technologically proficient but remains socially retarded and unable to get along with his neighbor, either next door or aross the sea. This is Earth and he calls it Home. Very nice work WindWalker. Namyh
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2009-04-18 08:17 AM


Nodding in agreement with the previous reply.
Too many self-centered spoiled brats have controlled the world and all the precious resources of Gaia. Yes, anyone from beyond our globe looking to Earthlings for solutions on 'How to be a Good Neighbor' or 'How To Live in Peace and Harmony' would be sorely disappointed.
Still, there is no option but to keep trying to turn things around, for the sake of 'possible future generations' if not for our own benefit.
Another thought provoking write, dear poet friend.

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2009-04-18 08:19 AM


"their ignorance so contagious
throbs in mortal agony
capturing all
that passes by!"

... yes indeed ...

[one might even insert adjectives like endless
  or infinite in front of the word 'ignorance']

effective 'social impact'/conscience 'write' !

Osprey
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6 posted 2009-04-18 09:09 AM


Cynical, but I can't deny the truth of your poem. I suppose it's the buck in your pocket which ultimately decides whether you are in heaven or hell.
Looked upon, as a whole, we are not really getting it right, are we?

Dog
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7 posted 2009-04-18 10:03 AM


truth hurts doesnt it ! we are not getting it right agreed ! but i bet 'my bottom dollar' (to coin an american phrase) that there is an awful lot of of 'joe publics' out there who are getting it right, therefore the buck has to stop with leaders. anyway....inspiring poem, at the very least in the sense of conversation !
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2009-04-18 11:15 AM


Yes, dear One Who Walks With Wind. This most definitely is one aspect of Earth and Earthlings.

We're still experiencing growing pains! I pray that better times are ahead. However, I doubt that will come to pass until Man does one heckuvvalot of house-cleaning ~ or Gaia does it for us!

Love & Earth Light,

EA

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