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sentimental savorings |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 softly skimming across my soul ripples of remembering……… gossamer glimmering reminders such sweet sentimental savorings to undulating emotions, I admit complete lack of control wistful whisperings of wanting torment tenderly, taking their toll sincerely surrendering sanity to your extraordinary exquisiteness, I extol ~SEA~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I just love the title on this one and it truly delivers. It is so alliteratively alluring...  Excellent work... |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Wow, I love the way this rolls off the tongue, and makes me want to smile. Very, very nice. Tracey. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
The alliteration is fantastic. Another one up for the romantics SEA. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
wistful whisperings of wanting torment tenderly, taking their toll sincerely surrendering sanity to your extraordinary exquisiteness, I extol There is a touch of the masters hand about the way you placed you words in this one dear Susan. A delight to read. Love Lindsay |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I agree with the others about the wonderful alliteration. This is a delight to enjoy out loud. Heather |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Whoo Hooo - you rock - that was not as easy as it looks! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suesea it is a pleasure to see the pressure of your leisure penned in treasured spend |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
softly skimming across my soul ripples of remembering……… lovely words...can't recall the last time I had a "complete lack of control"  M |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
wistful whisperings of wanting Love this line...seems to roll off the tongue in a pleasurable way... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
ripples of rembering sensually flowing so beautfully Hope |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks you guys  you give me warm fuzzies |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
The whole thing is a tongue twister. Nice write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"softly skimming across my soul ripples of remembering………" ~ wistfully whispered... Linda |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Very tenderly romantic SEA. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang girl, you gotta get a book together!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoying the fine rhythm, and superb alliterations that roll off the tongue. Take a bow, lady! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, This has good use of words, and a nice picture. Love Bobby |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I assuredly appreciate your astounding alliteration. *S* Beautiful work! *S* |
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