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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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split I do I have them, high and I am you dancing in the I-see-through you (are) restless dancing dank it hurts it's dirt and rest less-ness-esses (esses) are a quark a quirk as baby kicks subservient splashing on the Page... I flame pulling windows and my name wishing I was wrong again just wishing I was wrong I gain nothing pulling shutters shut. listen to the rain... again splicing those palmetto plain and split like one of us again dancing dottied under eaves-- I have windows--high. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"wishing I was wrong again just wishing I was wrong I gain nothing pulling shutters shut. listen to the rain..." this is awesome  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, you certainly do have windows. Ready for a call? x.....jo |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
there is a certain rhythm to this that accentuates the content...very nice indeed |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Ms. Blaze, You are a journey and each of your offerings are sidelong trips. Cool. Heather [This message has been edited by unboundpoetess (04-18-2009 12:10 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yup, yup, you are a trip alright.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
wishing I was wrong again just wishing I was wrong I gain nothing pulling shutters shut. listen to the rain... again I can almost hear the pacing... or maybe that's the clock ticking. *S* Either way... you draw the reader in and speed their heartbeats... wonderful work!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Hell I just shoot out the windows..seems the spraying glass usually helps clear the building of any unwanted dreams that might be trying to sneak in. I love your work..hope you don't mind me using a four letter word. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I actually do have windows high up. I like 'em there. Some nights the moon winks at me through 'em. And thanks for the call Jo--and thanks all of you who try to figure me out. Some times I just spill my beverage and try to find designs in my mess. And DS--now you've gone and done it. Set the standard with that four letter word, and now we'll all have to go to work. (Hopefully, we shall be able to, yes?) Thanks all, for tagging on to one of my free-er verses.  |
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