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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

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0 posted 2009-04-16 02:51 PM

Take a journey through time
Take a trip through my mind
All the pleasures you’ll feel
And all the sights you will see
Are the gifts I bring for you
The reason for the things that I do
Come on now and take my hand
Let me take you through the land
This is the path we both share
Breathing in each other’s own air
Let us be as one forever
Nobody to say the word never
For words are not spoken nor needed
As everything else goes unheeded
More human than you thought was real
Less flesh than what you can feel
If only just for this one moment in time
Come and journey through my mind

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2009-04-16 05:37 PM

sounds like a fun trip to me

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2009-04-16 07:33 PM

Your mind's journeys
are indeed a trip revealed,
and reveled.

Lovely words, these are.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

3 posted 2009-04-16 07:47 PM

I really like this one!
It reminded me I wrote one about crawling through someone's mind naked.

Osprey
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since 2009-04-12

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4 posted 2009-04-16 08:14 PM

Sounds better than where I am...I'm with you.

Namyh
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5 posted 2009-04-16 09:43 PM

Chalmette Guy - My bags are packed and you've given me a ticket. Make it a round trip one, in case I want to go again. I enjoyed this CG. Namyh

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

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Louisiana

6 posted 2009-04-17 08:36 AM

Thank you guys.

Midnite... you got a picture to go with that poem? *S*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2009-04-17 06:58 PM

Fine writing...James

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2009-04-18 11:46 AM

When I saw that you had posted a poem entitled, "Trip Through My Mind", ~ I was immediately intrigued!

Thanks for the trip! ~ It was a 'trip' as I knew it would be! lol

I like the way you think! ~ and write!

EA

Osprey
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9 posted 2009-04-18 12:30 PM

You sound like a peaceful soul; a journey worth taking.

critical mass
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since 2009-03-25

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Michigan

10 posted 2009-04-19 11:52 AM

It reminded me I wrote one about crawling through someone's mind naked.

That adds new meaning to
naked in the midnightsun

Nice write

Midnitesun

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Gaia

11 posted 2009-04-19 08:58 PM

lucky for you I'm camera shy

Chalmette Guy
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Louisiana

12 posted 2009-04-20 08:39 AM

I'll be the judge of lucky or not. lol

suthern

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13 posted 2009-04-20 03:17 PM

If only just for this one moment in time
Come and journey through my mind

LOL... I know I had something to say about what a wonderful journey that would be... but I lost all coherent thought as I read all the crawling naked comments. LOL

Thoroughly enjoyed both poem and comments! *S*

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