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Open Poetry #44

Bones Wet, Cold, Night

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-04-15 02:08 PM

It’s a wet, cold night,
Bones is hungry.

The settlement house is closed,
he has no place to go.

His teeth are chattering,
he can’t stop shivering.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-04-15 02:16 PM

Hello Bobby I have experimented such a nigtht once, it was in England and it is a bad memory...Bones needs some help for sure.

regards

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-04-15 02:24 PM

Thanks Yann,

It's memories of nights like this that mold the Northern character. It's what makes us aggressive, and nasty.

Many times help doesn't come until you find/take a warm place.

Bobby

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

3 posted 2009-04-15 02:45 PM

Pore bones I know what it is like to be cold and hungry and not know were the next meal is coming from...excellent words Bobby..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-04-15 02:49 PM

Bobby - being cold and hungry isn't good for Bones. Send him over, have food, shelter, and good conversation...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2009-04-15 07:07 PM

Fine writing...James

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2009-04-16 02:46 PM

Thanks dear Annie,

It's good you have those memories. Then you can get into Bones head.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2009-04-16 02:48 PM

Thanks Bill,

You are correct. Being wet, cold, and hungry doesn't really do much for anyone.

Bones will be right over, he likes the sound of that.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2009-04-16 02:48 PM

Thanks James,

I'm very pleased the poem worked well for you.

Bobby

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