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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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I see your face in the beats between words in the space between here and now who am I too say you are not what I need? forgetful sometimes you are not there in thoughts held like clouds above my head who am I too say you are not what I need sometimes what we feel can be trusted in rare occasions I will listen. You are what I need |
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Dog Junior Member
since 2009-04-09
Posts 48England |
ive read this a few times over, i like it more everytime, yup thats well written ! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"sometimes what we feel can be trusted in rare occasions I will listen. You are what I need" this is outstanding.... I really love the way you write  |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Yes...I too like the way you write. Very nice. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Oh my gosh!!! Your back!!!!!! Nice to see you and your poetry my friend. Juju -Juju |
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