Open Poetry #44 |
He Believed |
Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
She came too late that year for the welcoming white of the wild garlic, though crushed beneath their feet they shared its rising scent. With summer's approval, the valley laid a spread of hospitality; played a slow motion picture show entitled: All About Green; offered a martyr's faith. A Blue-winged Olive dipped down, troutless and unappetizing, beneath the mirage heat that stroked the whispering chuckle of the valley stream. Memories of split-cane rods and paternal bonding divided them in a daydream; he was a boy again. Oblivious to his thoughts, seeking the higher ground, she claimed the oaks, her servants, as they offered up their verdant mantle. Ever watchful of such Celtic hue, they breezed a mottled fealty to their axeless, cotton-dressed Boudica. And he went to her, late that night, as she murmured in occupied sleep. Her hair was everywhere; that auburn fire of the midday sun, doused beneath the ochre-grey of the half-light. Those opening eyes: yielding, liquid sapphires that drove all darkness to its knees. The moment came with a smile: calm, expectant. Lips from slumber swollen surrendered freely; soft, tiny pillows of acceptance. He touched the gentle moisture of her dreams disturbed. Her scent was all of him; she became him; he believed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I most definitely will be on the lookout for more of your poetry. I was totally immersed in this lovely poem from beginning to end. Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, EA |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
This is pretty impressive. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Os' welcome to the bluezoo...enjoyed this piece, |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Striking work, Os. Heather |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisitely gracious painting of romance and passion, Osprey. I also wrote a poem, many years ago, with that line - "she became him", but it is not nearly as beautiful as your poem. I don't think I have posted it here. I look forward to reading more of such an excellent standard of (your) poetry, Osprey. A fellow bird of prey Owl |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is excellent and impressive. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I missed this one...not sure how. Reminiscent of a day on the Manistee. |
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SeraphimBroken Member
since 2009-03-09
Posts 74USA |
this took me away beautiful piece. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
As you know, I loved this poem~ ~ARH |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
The moment came with a smile: calm, expectant. Lips from slumber swollen surrendered freely; soft, tiny pillows of acceptance. He touched the gentle moisture of her dreams disturbed. Her scent was all of him; she became him; he believed. A very sweet tender poem my friend and I especcially loved those last two verses A delight to read Osprey. Lindsay |
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