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I Feel Alive (thanks Serenity Blaze)
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I Feel Alive (thanks Serenity Blaze) |
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Ethernaut Junior Member
since 2009-04-07
Posts 31NT, Australia |
******* this was the intro to "My Goddesses" and Serenity Blaze suggested that it, in itself, was a free verse poem. I agree most heartily. Here it is. Enjoy. (yeah I know, this could be too). ******* At 4am this morning I got back from walking, running and dancing beneath the light of the moon, along the shore in Darwin. It's a full moon tonight and though there was a cloudy sky, the light shone bright through the darkest cloudy night Arriving back, I was filled with elation, almost as if all the trials I have I had to go through this past year and definitely this past week no longer mattered. I feel alive! So alive I had to write this poem before I went to sleep. Enjoy, and sorry for the anagram... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thank you..for delighting me! scrumptious hugs  (this was very nice of you) thanks  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay. I confess. I've been waiting up to see if anyone else liked it. Looks like I gave you a bust, eh? and yanno? I still like it. So thanks. yer a doll....g'nite lovie.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 I love a story, Karen knows that. And I loved this story..and the others you will write. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was filled with elation, almost as if all the trials I have I had to go through this past year and definitely this past week no longer mattered. I feel alive! I definitely know this feeling... and enjoyed the writing of it! *S* Welcome! *S* |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely, uplifting poem, Ethernaut. I hope things get better for you soon, I've been down "there." Ida |
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Ethernaut Junior Member
since 2009-04-07
Posts 31NT, Australia |
thanks things are getting better. I'm on the bounce and gravity doesn't feel as strong |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well then, let's promote you, eh?  BACK TO THE TOP!!! (um, 'cause I said so? no...well, maybe, but I genuinely like the way you write when you are just talking, yanno?) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"So alive I had to write this poem before I went to sleep" ...certainly can relate to this...with drawers full of napkins scribbled with thoughts and sudden bursts of inspiration, sometimes the palm of my hand, unwashed as to not destroy the latest muse-message...and sleep is simply a foretaste to dream shadowed processes that do not always feed inspiration's energy...most everyone who posts on this board could probably relate...thank you for sharing this insightful write |
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