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Open Poetry #44
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j Tomorrow
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0 posted 2009-04-09 04:45 PM



My eyes are made of the sun
awareness arrested in consciousness
born of destruction, true love is silence
peace in a sea of restlessness
breath in a void of breathlessness
truth speaks not, but creates
the one language of the stars



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-04-09 06:32 PM


Nice! I especially like this:

"peace in a sea of restlessness"

varun
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since 2009-04-05
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2 posted 2009-04-10 10:02 AM


Breath in void of breathlessness

I really like it

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