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cat scratch wishbone |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said something about feeding the cat and some dust on the windows needed to be moved to another side of the room for now at least my hands made sigh sounds on your jeans like they were asking them to drape over a chair and just be voyeurs to what we wanted to do when you had the sun on your shoulders and your eyes were closed that way you do just before you open them wide and say things that I would not write down in public I guess you heard the same sounds also when you slipped your fingers under my leather and held me just close enough to really want to ______________ daark (wishbone whiskey) |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Interesting poem had to read it twice which is a good thing i don't have much attention span  But the second reading i understood it more Thank you for sharing |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Well, see that cat and dust thing is our mom in our head. Good thing there are someones like you to lead us astray. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms annie, thanks for the second read _____________ raindance, thank you for your comment, astray is such a lovely word |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
In-u-end-oh, has a whole new meaning to me after reading this. fasinating how you write. Tracey. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Tracey, thanks amigo...I appreciate your reads |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Always a pleasure to immerse myself in your words darkdaddy. Hugs n peace ~D |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs..thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
From the wonderful imagery of the first lines through the heat that follows... this is fantastic! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thank you for the pleasure of your read ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh man. I'll move the dust if ... well, those leathers (murmurs about what long legs do to me - what you say? It wasn't your leg that caught her eye?) Well, whadda I know about commenting on poetry. I already told you I have ADD. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...not sure she even knew I had legs....I think it was the harley she was looking at, thanks babe |
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