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morning open, afternoon ajar
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morning open, afternoon ajar |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I will often suggest things to my coffee now as I think of you close by listening wearing only those darkened windows over your some sunday afternoon reflection we performed our adultery artistically at least in our minds the first few times visualizing the improper executions and then practicing our sincere surprise I told you that god was watching you dance you said no that is just a neighbor so we left the afternoon slightly ajar you said morning was warmer on your skin so I brought insatiable mental wrappings which were much easier for you to open you said you were contented with the outcome and you liked the opening of the package when we were nearly alone in our own hot water _________________ daark (wishbone whiskey) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I enjoy you best in small doses, with time in between.... Makes it a true pleasure to savor. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
nice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan, thank you for the nibble.. ______________ darkstar, thanks for the nice |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
so we left the afternoon slightly ajar you said morning was warmer on your skin Sometimes, finding favorite lines is an easy task... even when the whole is magnificent. *S* I've read this several times and these lines leave me smiling every time. *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Isn't that just a great method to adopt? You are soooooo cute. Excellent work. Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, Good work on this. I got a kick out of your last line. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - very senuous, like this writing very much. BC |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Your lady friend must be very ,umm... stimulated, to say the least. I'm floored by your mastery, as always. ~Maranda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks so much _______________ ms mar, thanks my friend _________________ BJ, thank you guy!! ______________________ Bill, thanks so much ! __________________ ms maranda, thank you for the sweet words ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love how you use words. This poem made me smile. I can see the neighbor - she is overstuffed into her bra and has moisturizer smeared on her face. She's watching you and wishing ... See, my mind goes in strange directions and it must be your fault. It sure ain't mine. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san..what is moisturizer? thanks babe |
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