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Cold Rain
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Cold Rain |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Cold Rain 4-6-09 Driven, cold rain mounts a rising wind, rides the gale to glory: lovers til the end. A given, that we should come to this. I knew, you knew, there’d be no parting kiss. Trumpets for the soldiers, bells for the slain. Drums and thunder hold us waiting for the rain. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Nan, this is masterfully written. Love, Margherita |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Great piece of writing here. Enjoyed. Heather |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Pilgrimage - a cold rain brews, but your words are warm... BC |
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Wordplay Junior Member
since 2009-04-07
Posts 13 |
Base of the iceberg my friend. Words and you go well together |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
to be honest.....it made my eyes teary... it's a really nice read. lover's til the end...... love the thought. "omnia vincit amor" |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I keep reading this over and over, and keep liking it more and more. |
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KillerEagle2009 New Member
since 2009-04-08
Posts 8Kansas, USA!!! |
Really good, short and sweet with good imagery. The way i like them. Well i do write some long ones, but this was good. Keep it up! ^O^ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Great writing, Nan. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Trumpets for the soldiers, bells for the slain. And applause for the poet... this is fantastic! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I knew, you knew, there’d be no parting kiss." ~ and your brilliant closing made that very apparent!  Linda |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You guys are so nice! Thank you all! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well done, poet. Powerful evocative imagery. Hope you're 'weathering' all the storms that have been hitting your area? (thanks for your reply to Monsieur d'Oncology) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
couldn't pick a favorite line, loved it all~~  M |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Pilgrimage Trumpets for the soldiers, bells for the slain. Drums and thunder hold us waiting for the rain. Very nicely done. Great ending. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Nan, I love this one. Alison |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, guys. I appreciate you taking the time to comment on it.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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