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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2009-04-13 08:15 AM


While certain words have syllables
that may count only one
Once context is applied to them
such rules can be undone

How can this be? You ask of me
incredulous at best
To which I  say now let me see
let's put this to the test

A meter's been established here
that truths may be revealed
Let's yield to the context now
that we're this far afield

What magic's this, some parlor trick,
set to decieve your eyes?
Or mere poetic license where
a different rule applies?

A bit of both I'd like to think
the writers slight of hand
May cause the reader to pronounce
what they don't understand

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1 posted 2009-04-13 12:49 PM


LOL... I'd answered the question (for me, one) before I read the poem... and sure enough, that line didn't flow for me. *G*

But you're absolutely right... our individual speech patterns and accents influence our poetry reading! *S*

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2 posted 2009-04-13 03:36 PM


suthern,
Thanks, yep they sure do. This subject came up in the workshop so I thought I'd play around with it. Yield , of course, has one syllable as do some other words that can be pronounced with two syllables depending on context. Once the meter has been established
the reader automatically pronounces the extra syllable in order to maintain it.

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3 posted 2009-04-30 01:56 AM


Very clever - and I am laughing.  You write so well.  

Alison

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4 posted 2009-04-30 08:39 AM


Very cute, Doc - If you can't beat 'em - Cheat 'em...

Stretch that syllable for all you can get from it!


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