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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2009-04-06 05:48 PM




The meaning of Romance will surely test
The truest quill, still-poised in wait...to tell —
What is the source? Where does the magic rest
That feeds the flow of ink to form the spell?
But how tell a stone what a breath will hush,
What ancient message of a vein is part —
A Romance must be felt — its silky rush
And, too, its often-sudden sting the heart
Must feel that longs to understand - Thus shield
Not the crimson vault! Let the rush inside
And stoke love’s infant embers to last yield
That flame by which eternal laws abide —
As to life is breath, to love is romance,
And so in life and love entwined we dance.


CG

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1 posted 2009-04-07 06:32 AM


"But how tell a stone what a breath will hush"
Nice line. Indeed, what words could describe it adequately.

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-04-07 08:05 AM


A Romance must be felt — its silky rush
And, too, its often-sudden sting the heart
Must feel that longs to understand -


Loved these lines~

~ARH

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3 posted 2009-04-07 09:08 AM


As to life is breath, to love is romance,
And so in life and love entwined we dance.

I liked this very much!! *S*

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2009-04-07 04:55 PM


simply superb!

resounding and long-sustained applause for this fine 'penning' !!

Margherita
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5 posted 2009-04-07 04:59 PM


quote:
As to life is breath, to love is romance,
And so in life and love entwined we dance.



Very beautifully expressed!

Love,
Margherita

unboundpoetess
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6 posted 2009-04-07 07:22 PM


Expressed beautifully, CG. Oopsie, Margherita prolly didn't know she had an echo...

Heather

[This message has been edited by unboundpoetess (04-07-2009 08:11 PM).]

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