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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Dust The time When we become dust Then we will finally be Together again Yet free Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Juju I don't know as you need "still" in the last line. . . ("yet free" is better as a last line; don't change that). John |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Hah solved line one! -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. PS http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CxH7FlFfqEw Good for you John . |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well let's hope you don't get discovered by a Red Devil passing by. Very interesting concept. Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
On soul level you are always free, no need to wait till you are dust. I do understand though ... Your thought is well expressed. Love, Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words are on my mind today~~  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Juju. I would like to echo Margherita's response, verbatim. Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the thoughts of Juju! ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Jules, great little write here! wow |
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Noel Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 42West Coast |
Very nice. Love the concept! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm kind of on the same page today. Nice write, Juju~ |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Loved this. It speaks volumes to me. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, The nice thought is there, and the idea has possibilities if your cremated and the ashes cast to the wind. Love Bobby |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
I like it |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
well im checking all your poems juju.. you are intense..and fresh. i feel this one especially. "omnia vincit amor" |
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