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Windhover
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2009-04-06 04:04 PM



    


or.... What Love is really all about.

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The Dictionary definition really doesn't help us much;
"Warm liking, or affection;"
no... not quite; it lacks a certain touch
of magic...
but, when you consider it's the concept, deeply thought
out
by some dusty academic; little wonder it is fraught
with mediocrity,
but, then... about the passion, and the pain;
the tightening throat, the trembling doubt;
his love of books... not quite the same.

I think, a closer definition...if, indeed, there's one at all,
is
Love, is God's Banana skin; encounter it...
you slip...
you fall.
And, He must have a sense of humour; think of all the stupid things
we humans say and do, when love engulfs us with luxuriant wings.
I mean... when first in love, how our brain softens, and we cannot think
or speak, in normal conversation... into baby-talk, we sink.
The child-like actions... tickling, nibbling;
feeling we could almost fly;
Yes, you can almost hear the laughter echoing down from up on high.

Love has a different set of rules... a much more tolerant mental state;
no matter, if your lover's body fails what fashion, now dictates...
or accidentally breaking wind, whilst making love...
calamity!
Collapsing in each others arms... both giggling, uncontrollably.
Blind to those annoying habits we all share, it must be said;
Underwear dropped in the corner...
biscuit crumbs left in the bed;
toothpaste tube squeezed in the middle...
leaving up the toilet seat;
my last damn razor has been used by her, to shave her legs...
how sweet.

Perhaps, your definition strives to reach Romantic's heady feel
for love,
but, this is what you get... if you are fortunate;
it's real
consideration for your needs;
warm contentment, company.
Hearts and minds in step, together...
and that's good enough for me.
The poems and the songs of love, though charming, just cannot begin
to weave the magic found...
when you've just stepped on God's Banana Skin.



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-04-07 05:39 PM


quote:
And, He must have a sense of humour; think of all the stupid things
we humans say and do, when love engulfs us with luxuriant wings.
I mean... when first in love, how our brain softens, and we cannot think
or speak, in normal conversation... into baby-talk, we sink.
The child-like actions... tickling, nibbling;
feeling we could almost fly;
Yes, you can almost hear the laughter echoing down from up on high.



Lovely and all those in love can relate I am sure.


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2009-04-07 08:24 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
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