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sheets that don't fit
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sheets that don't fit |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
i remember folding my laundry in my dorm room putting it all away with the grateful dead’s “touch of gray” playing on the radio t-shirts went neatly folded in the first drawer blue jeans in the second boxers and socks stuck wherever i don’t remember what she said or wore or why she was mad at me i just remember her sitting on my naked bed then before she left me for good her helping me put the fitted sheet on because after getting washed the sheet was always a little smaller than the bed |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
simply wonderful ...always we remember how they made us feel and rarely what they said... you made me feel the bewilderment too |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
bewilderment... exactly... why things don't work the way they should. *S* I enjoyed this very much! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A vivid life-snippet. I have the same sheet problems! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, the things that linger in the memory room. Nice play off the title I enjoyed how you worked it in. Enjoyable read. Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Noah, you well succeeded in sharing the emotion of this life changing moment. Very touching. Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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