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Eloise
Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2009-04-04 05:57 PM



The housework never seems to end.
With clothes to iron, socks to mend.
The dust is building up again.
No time to even phone a friend.

Dishes to wash, another meal to cook.
All of the rugs have already been shook.
Washing and scrubbing every little nook.
No time for a magazine or a book.

Then out the door with a list of errands.
Checking each one off as I get them done.
Drive to the school and pick up the children.
This hectic day has not been any fun.

Last meal finished everyone has been fed.
One more mend to make, with needle and thread.
The kids are at last tucked into their bed.
And quiet time for me now lies ahead.

These next couple of hours are my own.
So give me  a book or perhaps the phone.
I'll soak in the tub, and let my mind roam.
Just give me my space and leave me alone!



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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-04-04 06:00 PM


Everyone needs their space,
especially to read, write or create!

I agree~

~ARH

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-04-04 07:48 PM


Oh, I know this scenario all too well. That "me time" is like heaven.
                               Ida

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2009-04-04 08:17 PM


I agree and hope you have a relaxing time.
I can come and scrub your back if you want me to but I'd have to get out my flying saucer to make the rip in a hurry. I'm trying to save on my air miles because the lease is almost up and I want to get out of those payments.   (smile)

Good poem!

Eric

critical mass
Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275
Michigan
4 posted 2009-04-04 09:11 PM


That makes me tired.


nicely done

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2009-04-04 09:49 PM


Enjoyed the Write E!


ARCTIC WIND

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
6 posted 2009-04-05 12:53 PM


Hectic lives need those hours to recharge! *S* Enjoyed this!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2009-04-07 08:16 PM


Nice writing...James
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