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angellea
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0 posted 2009-04-04 04:59 PM


lingering innocence

sparkling brown spheres, know no evil
my happiness rests in your beautiful lash covered innocence
light filled windows to your soul
may it linger always
*to my little hawk*


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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2009-04-04 05:47 PM


Awww, just beautiful.
               Ida

ethome
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2 posted 2009-04-04 06:04 PM


Sounds like flying grace to me but then what do I know.
I found this write intriguing.

Eric

angellea
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3 posted 2009-04-04 07:36 PM


Ida, thanks for stopping in. I appreciate your comment.

Eric, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote this for my oldest son. His name actually means "little hawk."

unboundpoetess
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4 posted 2009-04-04 08:53 PM


Gorgeous, angellea.
I could dive liquid deep in those baby browns.

Heather

angellea
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5 posted 2009-04-04 09:38 PM


No doubt! Could his lashes BE any longer.

Thanks, dear.

~Maranda

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-04-04 09:50 PM


I found myself really enjoying this when I read it! Good Work! ~ I hope you like it here a Pip!


ARCTIC WIND

Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2009-04-04 09:51 PM


This is simply beautiful.
angellea
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8 posted 2009-04-04 09:59 PM


Arctic Wind, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I  enjoy being here very much. This is the first time I've been inspired to write in a very long time.

Oklahoma Rose, nice to meet you. Thanks for stopping by. Thank you for your kind words.

Spuddette
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9 posted 2009-04-05 07:12 AM


Very pretty. xx
critical mass
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10 posted 2009-04-05 07:35 AM


very nice.
angellea
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11 posted 2009-04-05 12:06 PM


Spuddette

Critical mass

Thanks for checking it out. I appreciate it.

Margherita
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Eternity
12 posted 2009-04-05 06:10 PM


Very lovely!

Love,
Margherita

angellea
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13 posted 2009-04-05 09:00 PM


Thanks, Margherita. So sweet of you to stop by and comment.
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