Open Poetry #44 |
Beneath The Blue Velvet Moon |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lay awake with me tonight, in whispers underneath the moon, sharing souls, dreams take flight, feeding my heart with poetic spoon, breathe your breath upon my face, a velvet misty vapor covering me, you have brought me to this place, your soft touch, my healing recovery, The windows of my soul are open, you have lit the candles aflame, once this harden heart was broken, you mend it when you whisper my name, Tell me your darkest secrets, share with me your dreams and mind, as we move forward with no regrets, no pause, or fast forward, not rewind, hear the silence in the air, so peaceful, just you and I, as your fingers run through my hair, you kiss the tears from my eyes, This is our moment, our time, melt me, mold me, shape my heart, hold it precious, to steal is a crime, promise to never break it apart, Lay with me here tonight, in the shadows of the moon, wrap your arms around me tight, For morning comes to soon... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
"feeding my heart with poetic spoon" Once again "Beautiful" Very well done. Enjoyed this one also. Eloise |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks El~ Yes it is a great treat, when being fed lines of beautiful poetry written just for you! ~ARh |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Beautiful romantic imagery dear Heart. In bliss the lovers lie entranced And consumate gentle romance With words spoken soft and low, As gentle as the falling snow. When I see your face all the angels are shamed. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
BEAUTIFUL WRITE ARH!!! ~ I loved this ARCTIC WIND |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhh . . . spring brings romance and no better mood to be in. Wonderful from top to bottom. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Super pictures and beautiful write! That girl in the lower picture should do alright financially because it's obvious her lover went to dental school.....LOL! Aw c'mon jus kiddin. Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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