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OwlSA
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0 posted 2009-04-03 07:23 PM



BLOSSOM
21 September 2003

Let us open new truths
with dawn-fresh courage
and flow them, like birdsong, into
those that are and were
and rainbow them into the future
brightly.

Owl

© Copyright 2009 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-04-03 07:24 PM


Beautifully Written!


ARCTIC WIND

OwlSA
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2 posted 2009-04-03 07:25 PM


Thank you again, Arctic Wind!

Owl

unboundpoetess
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3 posted 2009-04-03 08:54 PM


Adore "rainbow them into the future brightly".

Inspiring and enduring words here.

Heather

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-04-03 08:59 PM


Yo dear OwlSA,

You have a good thought in this poem.

Bobby

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Gaia
5 posted 2009-04-03 09:06 PM


Yes, fine thoughts and presentation, and I would choose the same lines as Heather.
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2009-04-03 11:10 PM


your word choice and combination brings the magic through in this poem
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-04-04 03:32 AM


Lovely thoughts, Diana.
                      Ida

OwlSA
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8 posted 2009-04-04 01:22 PM


Thank you, Heather.  There is little, if anything, that gives me more pleasure than to inspire somebody – and what I said in the poem is exactly what I try to do.  

Thank you, Bobby, for your kind words.  

Thank you Kacy.  I am glad you enjoyed it.  

Thank you, Michele.  I am very honoured by your comment, especially as you do all those things so superbly yourself!  

Thank you, Ida.  I am glad you thought so.

Owl

Sunshine
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9 posted 2009-04-04 07:00 PM


New truths...

how true this is.

Courage...I wonder, do we have it?

I know you do, Sis.

Yes, new truths...

new worlds.

Only the brave, such as you, will meet this
quest.

You rock!


Margherita
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10 posted 2009-04-05 06:00 PM


This is really magical, dear Diana!

You have been missed.

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2009-04-06 09:04 AM


Let us open new truths
with dawn-fresh courage

You do so with unmatched grace. *S* Beautiful! *S*

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