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A Lover's Touch
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A Lover's Touch |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The thought of a "lover's touch" coming out of the mist, surely does stir the fires in me!   Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a nice combination. I'm somewhat puzzled by the pointed ears, but that's just me. Bobby |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Okay, those last two lines are so romantic, you made me sigh. Excuse me, I have to go back and read it again. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Very nice. The whole piece was a whispered shiver. Heather |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A gentle lover's touch in the night must be the most tender and supernal pleasure that we can experience. Enjoyed this Bill. When I see your face all the angels are shamed. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds as if you found the touch to touch. Enjoyed much sir. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is gorgeous! ~ Wonderful Write Bill  ARCTIC WIND |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice Bill A different picture this time but very effective. Bobby should know that even Spock's children have to have lovers or else how can a Vulcan reproduce....Jus kiddin. Well done Bill, you're the king of romance. Eric |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Linda - let those fires burn, it's a good thing. Thanks again for your comments... Bobby - Spock did have some children, therefore the pointed ears. Pilgrimage - I did hear you sigh, and once again when you re-read those lines... unboundpoetess - Yes, to whisper this write is a shiver. Suncleaver - I love a misty night, and to experience a lover's touch is most tender and pleasureable... Mark - nice to see you again. Appreciate your words... Artic Wind - thank you once again for your kind reply... ethome - h'mmmm, Vulcans reproduce also, I mentioned something like that to Bobby. Thank you for the kind reply. BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A touch of ET combined with your poetic sensitivity and sensuousness, makes for a great read, dear Bill. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Quite romantic Bill Much enjoyed. Well done Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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aguardianangel New Member
since 2009-04-05
Posts 7 |
"A Lover's Touch"! Oh, how I love that thought. This is simply BEAUTIFUL! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
What a beautiful dreamscape you have penned here! Loved it! |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
fabulous |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very nice bill bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Ahhh, My friend, You've been in love. I can tell. Very nice. Billie C. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - thanks for stopping by... Margherita - you're too kind, thank you... LindsayP - my friend, thank you for your words... aguardianangel - I'm glad you like this writing... Jeffrey Carter - thank you for your thoughts... Boshii2 - thanks for coming by... bslicher - thank you bernie... Billie - yes, you may be correct with your thoughts... BC |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Beautiful - absolutely the best one yet with or without the picture. Can't wait for the next one! Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ariana - I always look forward to your replies, and I thank you for this one. More poetry is on the way... BC |
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