Open Poetry #44 |
No Scaffold Required |
Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
I gave up trying to write free verse but I had to do something. So I got the mixer out, four to one sand and cement, a splash of plasticiser then the appetiser - leaning on a spade with a rolled cigarette just waiting for the mix. Four courses on a concrete base, two bricks wide, with a row of headers and a two brick pillar at each end. Ten feet long, but not straight, it couldn’t be straight, it had to be curved - free style. I built a wall Then read it. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*grin* /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=70&topic=001974 |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
same recipe as me nice kind regards Boshii2 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like my kind of wall...crooked, and curvy... |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
Thanks for the replies. Karen, Believe it or not I actually did build a wall in the garden yesterday. I’ve taken a couple of days off from the grind of the office, swapping my suit, shirt and tie for my work jeans and boots and doing some proper work for a change. I miss getting my hands dirty I guess, plus there’s a real sense of satisfaction when, while leaning on a spade, you can actually see the tangible results of your labour. I’m planting potatoes today - I’ve got a yearning for the Good Life. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ten feet long, but not straight, it couldn’t be straight, it had to be curved - free style. I love the way you bring your labors together. *S* And if your potato crop is as tasty as your poems, you'll be feasting. *S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Potatoes? Sounds like you're gonna need a hoe. and laughing love ya darlin'! |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Recommend a splash of fairy liquid in the mix...hehehe. Pretty good with a shovel myself if you need a lift with your spuds!! |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Yeah free verse is kinda like that. and yes everyone needs a hoe. |
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