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unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

0 posted 2009-04-03 03:20 PM

Blinds

Day's genesis
peels skin,
thieving obscurity,
bleeding rays across windows
too drawn to dream.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

1 posted 2009-04-03 04:08 PM

Heather, would those be horizontal, or vertical?

Makes me wonder?

Tracey.

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

2 posted 2009-04-03 04:31 PM

Horizontal fer sure, Tracey.
And very, very green...

Heather

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-04-03 07:26 PM

unboundpoetess - I find a lot more meaning in these words than meets the eye, nice write...

BC

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2009-04-03 07:31 PM

Ah but who wants to be obscure for very long?
This is a great little trip into the light of penetrating sun.

Get up be happy here it comes!

Well written.

Eric

angellea
Member

since 2009-03-29

Posts 144
NC, USA

5 posted 2009-04-03 08:55 PM

You're getting sleeeepy...very sleepy. ;-) (wink-wink)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2009-04-03 09:03 PM

Open those lids and smile.

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

7 posted 2009-04-03 09:28 PM

BC,
Thanks for taking a stroll between the lines with me.

Eric,
My mom is a raging insomniac and I am afraid the penetrating sun would bore a hole into her forehead, lol. And obscurity, well, sometimes it can be a cage and sometimes it can give you wings

angellea,
*winks back*
*giggles*

Midnite,
If I smiled with my lids closed then everyone would want to know what I was grinnin' about : )

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-04-04 11:39 AM

I like this very much... that last line is especially powerful! *S*

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

9 posted 2009-04-04 03:33 PM

Appreciate you always, ms. suthern.

Thank you,
Heather

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

10 posted 2009-04-05 08:43 AM

Nice read, kind of lonely.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2009-04-05 10:10 AM

I think of night, being peeled away to the skin of day. Great inspiration.
Smooth presentation here.

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