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lover's strum ace's wild
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lover's strum ace's wild |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I threw my cards on the table then several windows ago in front of your eyes and you felt of my jeans with your fingers to see if there was a gentleman inside I remember your smile too when there was but only part time and mostly rowdy enough to make you want to be the curves of my highway like a lover's gibson only evening strummed there will be coffee smells in the sky there on saturday when the clouds are long hemmed and you have to decide if you will be or not when I arrive early to steal the safety pin that you use to dead bolt your bedroom door when you want to sleep through your dreams and hope they aren't gone again in the morning there, across the street from never ending just off the 33 up the hill from want to _______________ daark (forbidden) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now this has me seeing Matilija poppies, and missing sunbathing river rocks. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your words are a feast... I couldn't begin to choose a favorite line! Beautiful work! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite...thanks for glancing out the window lady!! ________________ ms suthern, thanks babe for the eyes and smile |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
*Sighs as she munches* (TY suthern) Heather |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Heather..thank you ms |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
..and was there? A gentleman inside...nice lines D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms spuddette..not sure what she thought..she did call him by several other words... thanks ms |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
and you felt of my jeans with your fingers to see if there was a gentleman inside this line made me smile. I wonder what the parameters are. cheers |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
loved all of this Mr Daark.. deliciously you! RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Your words in this are beautifully written with a good flow and excellent poetic twist!  ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: So when will your verses be available to the world's lovers? You have this ace up your sleeve. Time to use it! You are sooooooo good! Love, Margherita  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dark I have a copy of a Gibson ES-335 semi hollow body. I can't afford the real thing it's over three grand. I love the atmosphere of this piece and the open end. Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi DS....I have a guitar but most of its strings are broken. Enjoyed your song here, as always. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
critical mass...thanks so much _____________ ms r&b, thanks babe ______________ aw, thanks amigo __________________ vandana, thank you __________________ ms mar, thanks so much special frind __________________ eric, thanks guy for the read ___________________ ms martie, thanks lil neighbor.(yes you still are) |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
I sensed the steady strum of inner wild here in your words...images. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Strumming the strings of appreciation in the passion of music and it's touches. A treat to us you are with your visions and your very capable way of bringing them to us. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
raindance..thank you very much for looking in this one ______________ mark, humble thanks sir, I appreciate your reads |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I dunno. Reading your poetry is like breaking a fast or a diet or forgetting I gave up cussing for Lent. Damn. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thank you |
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