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Open Poetry #44
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Juju
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0 posted 2009-03-31 09:25 PM

Sunset At Dawn

Salmon swim upstream
The sun sets as dawn approaches
She had eyes like her father

The mother dove cries
The sun low over the lake
The blind man knows not beauty

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1 posted 2009-03-31 09:30 PM

"The sun sets as dawn approaches
She had eyes like her father"


I love this.
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2009-04-01 01:17 PM

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Good Juju

John

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